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|Subject: Re: Does this sound ok||Date: 9/10/2012 12:54 PM|
|Author: knighttof3||Number: 12584 of 14537|
"the tried-and-tested best practice consulting and solution concept of SOFTWARE COMPANY gets you up and running within days"
SOFTWARE COMPANY's vetted, field-tested approach to finding the best solution in the shortest time will have you up and running in days.
Too far, promises too much. No one said anything about field-tested or shortest time To be fair, "running within days" is a short time, but may not be open to be claimed as the shortest.
Is "Solution concept" just marketing BS or does it mean something like a proprietary method? I will assume it's marketing, but otherwise the translation can be even better.
So, not disturbing OP's translation too much:
The best consulting practices and solutions from SOFTWARE COMPANY get you up and running within days.
("gets you up" is wrong because "concept" applies only to "solution", not to both "consulting" and "solution", I assume.)
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