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but millions of kilometers away.

Thank you SO much for not using klicks. That just drives me nuts! ;-)

Nicely written, your dialog is not stilted (I can't write dialog for anything!). And thus far your descriptions don't sound like travelogues.

I have one hope too, that no where in your novel do you ever, EVER use the phrase: He/she/it "drank deeply". Damn, I HATE that phrase!

RM ;-)
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