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| Subject: Re: Resume Critique | Date: 3/31/2007 4:21 PM | |
| Author: pauleckler | Number: 233 of 268 | |
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Your resume is basically OK. You do not state a position objective. I presume you want a business management position, but can you be more specific? P&L responsibility? In a technical/IT field? Executive postion? More project management? Bigger projects? If you have had P&L responsibility, you should say so clearly. You seem to imply, but don't say so. You clearly are a responsible person who can communicate with the executive ranks. Have you managed people? How many? How long? What rank? Professionals? Are you destined to be a line manager? Or are you a staff manager? Your summary is a bit long. The last sentence "MBA in Finance and PMP certified" has the most impact. So you might try compressing the other verbage a bit. Stress education and experience. |
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