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She brings him in....

What has led up to this? What are their emotional states? And history?

Is she a police officer? Or making a citizen's arrest? Or was he a homeless person she found and is turning him over so the authorities can handle his case? ;-)

He leaves out the back door... is he escaping? Having assaulted her?

Or does she release him? Does he remind her of a first love, such that she exhibits more compassion than wisdom?

Or does he offer to provide 'confidential informant' services if only she will release him? And she's looking for a promotion?

Does he kiss her with wild abandon that shocks alive her memories of ecstatic rapture from her past with him? (or someone else)

Not knowing the exact scene at the police station, I can't be of more help... If this was any help at all to you. It was entertaining for me, at any rate. ;-)

Love to keep those gray cells in motion....

Alice of the frogfarm
P.S. People wonder how I come up with dialogue; I tell them I 'see' the scene in my mind. My characters are 'real people', and I simply transcribe what they do and say. It's like describing what you see in a movie!


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